Online campaigns

If someone is the only one emailing another and them are just replying but no initially contact is the same?

I don’t usually ask anyone for help while writing a cover letter, but now it’s kind of crucial for me. I would appreciate if anyone could have a look at it quickly and juts let me know about some mistakes or bad stylistics I could have made.

Thanks a lot!!!!

*******

Dear Andrew,

as you probably know, I’m currently working as a Community Manager at Facebook. I love the company, but however great experience it has been, I‘ve been starting to look around for a new opportunity besides. We have been paid peanuts for half a year and we don’t have good prospects unfortunately, as the strategy for our Birmingham team is „internships only“.

I am applying for the grad position posted on your website. At your convenience, I’d appreciate the opportunity to discuss the position and my candidacy with you. You can find my CV attached to this e-mail or online at: xxxx

My extensive experience for the past 8 year gives me a unique ability to excel in various fields across marketing, advertising and sales. Before joining Facebook, I worked as a Campaign Manager at Citibank, Product & Project Manager in HSBC, Project & Telesales Manager in a multinational IT company and Account Director & Partner in an innovative digital ad agency. I have an account handling experience, thorough analytical and planning skills and I benefit from international experience combined with interest in world economies and linguistry.

I enjoy fast-paced environment, I am self-motivated do-er with solid work ethic and I take an entrepreneurial approach to anything I do. I’ve been watching Saatchi’s work, team and company’s spirit since we’ve joined your office and I believe I would be an ideal match for this position.

I’d love to find out more about the position you’re looking to fill, and I would welcome the opportunity to tell you how my skills and ideas can benefit Saatchi.

Thanks for your consideration, I look forward to hearing from you soon!

Best regards,
Jan
Thank you so much! I really appreciate your help

Yes, I know Bruce Willis is not running for president but I need a good campaign slogan for a project.

I’m thinking “Live Free or Die Hard” because of the movie he played in but does that even make sense?

Or do you have any ideas that kind of relate or at least make sense?

I am implementing a smoking awareness campaign on my campus, so that teens and adults between the ages of 16 to about 35, but I’m mostly concerned with getting the attention of the young adults. Any name suggestions?

i don’t want any websites, i need help coming up w/ a slogan for my campaign. I’m running for publicity. My name is Margot
any ideas?